My Best love poem I think. A story of two youths.
(2008)
this is the story of me and my muse wrapped up in substance and each other by 17 ...this is my best love poem In my opinion I can do no better... yet...it transcends the head over heels feeling that soon goes away and you sink or swim ...we swam...but under all the haze...which i refer to as the tide...which is a constant symbol in my poems ...but the tide where you cannot hear...and we were chained by it and chained to each other...we couldn't get away from it or each other...soon we had to stop one or end...that's the dramatics of it .. Makes a poem better...notice this poem is a staunch opposite from my poem Of Desire...which speaks of desire not of the one you love but a pure loveless lover ..in other words cheating or adultery...interesting opposites..but ones i stand by...i guess im a poet..its hard for me to only see one side.. :)...words aren't deeds ...I've literally been angered by people asking about this in my known people in real world. I mean he reads everything ..and loves everything..he understands me...even those he shouldn't..he knows what art is...he's the first to hear everything.
Note ** all my poems are copyrighted and have codes to prove ownership ... While I doubt anyone here does this ..still have to say Don't steal other people's work wether a poem is good enough or not .... It's personal and directly speaks from the soul of the writer and to take their work and say it's yours ..it's wrong and unnatural ..your stealing a peice of them ...it's nothing to do with money or rights...it's so much more than that...its happened to me .. It can happen to anyone .. It hurts and I always speak out against it even if to most it seems pretentious...