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Beneath The Tide

My Best love poem I think. A story of two youths.

 
I only watched those hands in sway
At a beat you played at the speed of hearts
Were owned by those who watched your face
Through shallower waters than mine apart
Waters not nearly as deep as mine
as I far beneath drowning softly realized
When in fated waves indeed apply
You like me, are chained down gently
Far beneath drowning, knowing
We dove right in to be set not free
 
You feel what I feel
You hear what I will not hear
You see what I see
I fear what you cannot fear
Our senses are the same
Our senses are the same
Beneath we are the same
 
Are we trapped in the same sea?
Are you drowning softly like me?
Do you love what you hate?
Do you laugh tears just like me?
Do you fear what’s left inside?
Within the veins that haven’t died
Here chained weightless next to me
Soft and silent beneath the tide
Silhouettes in a darker sea
 
Seduced by this wave and plea
Falling into the blackening blue
Softly chained in a deeper sea
Foolish was it to argue
Caught so deeply we could not flee
You are my only memory
You are my only memory
Souls as ships set out to sea
 
In love because your eyes are my eyes
When you breathe out I must sigh
Where you cannot cry I must cry
And with your final breath I must die
Where you last lay I lay beside
Soft and silent you and I
Our senses have one name
Our senses knew the tide
One soul our senses claim
Within the deep confide
If the sea could set aflame
Fire and water there are tied
Here so softly you and I
Soft and silent you and I
 
As wind we are inside a glass jar
Under wave upon wave
Under star by star
And we would do it all again
We endure
We love
We sustain
What we are and where we’ve been
Three waves pass over us chained underneath
What was before, what is and what will be
Chained together an eternity
Chained I by you and you by me
 
 
Catherine Renee Stanger
©Copyright
Written– 10-26-2008
REVISED– at a later date unknown

(2008)

this is the story of me and my muse wrapped up in substance and each other by 17 ...this is my best love poem In my opinion I can do no better... yet...it transcends the head over heels feeling that soon goes away and you sink or swim ...we swam...but under all the haze...which i refer to as the tide...which is a constant symbol in my poems ...but the tide where you cannot hear...and we were chained by it and chained to each other...we couldn't get away from it or each other...soon we had to stop one or end...that's the dramatics of it .. Makes a poem better...notice this poem is a staunch opposite from my poem Of Desire...which speaks of desire not of the one you love but a pure loveless lover ..in other words cheating or adultery...interesting opposites..but ones i stand by...i guess im a poet..its hard for me to only see one side.. :)...words aren't deeds ...I've literally been angered by people asking about this in my known people in real world. I mean he reads everything ..and loves everything..he understands me...even those he shouldn't..he knows what art is...he's the first to hear everything.

Note ** all my poems are copyrighted and have codes to prove ownership ... While I doubt anyone here does this ..still have to say Don't steal other people's work wether a poem is good enough or not .... It's personal and directly speaks from the soul of the writer and to take their work and say it's yours ..it's wrong and unnatural ..your stealing a peice of them ...it's nothing to do with money or rights...it's so much more than that...its happened to me .. It can happen to anyone .. It hurts and I always speak out against it even if to most it seems pretentious...

#desire #drugs #eternallove #love #ocean #soulmates #water

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