A positive Attempt..

Silence wears loud faces
Around our mouths it paces
Into our lips it takes seed
For many trials take the lead
Are these the ages those we waste
Sewn together with fortunes haste
Habits gaze into our past
And fears will eat our world at last
Many years and many shames
Riding on our many pains
Does happiness grow into the years?
At last the world will eat our fears
And our paths paved by those before
And locked inside the weeping door
Tears can dry and blood can hide
Away in veins that haven’t died
In our loves we’ll lay in peace
As hates will come and someday cease
©Catherine Renee Stanger

This was my attempt at writing something that could be seen as positive..i hope i succeeded...its got a good message ..the last two lines are my favorite...

Note ** all my poems are copyrighted and have codes to prove ownership ... While I doubt anyone here does this ..still have to say Don't steal other people's work wether a poem is good enough or not .... It's personal and directly speaks from the soul of the writer and to take their work and say it's yours ..it's wrong and unnatural ..your stealing a peice of them ...it's nothing to do with money or rights...it's so much more than that...its happened to me .. It can happen to anyone .. It hurts and I always speak out against it even if to most it seems pretentious...

Hope,Positive,revelation,new day

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