
faisal khattak
about 2 yearsits very mind boggling poem. i think the poet has mentioned mostly those aspects which are almost impossible to do or barely most people do. but still cant get why is he trying to restrain us from writing poetry. may be in my opinion he is trying to present the societies distasteful view about writing or reading poetry.

Misael Cureño
over 1 yearI am not really sure, because I've read in other of his works that he has tried to avoid young writers to be in that path, not because of the path itself but because of the things it involves. Everybody can write some words in a paper, but not everyone is prepared to afford the possiblity to not becoming as successful as one could want. You should be really in love of the art itself to accept even the death while following the song of the heart.

Jacob Bocaj
over 2 yearsI think the poet is reiterating something that is told to young people quite often.
"There are an infinite number of ways to be successful and happy, and just because you or even everybody can't see them doesn't mean that they aren't out there, and instead of sitting down to try and write poetry, or head an insurance firm, you should make known your thoughts in any way you chose and rule the entire world."

Warren Stribling
over 2 yearsBeyond the constructs of many of our species, the right and wrong, the morals and ethics...
There is life.
Action and consequence.
The purpose of life...
Is to live.
It's as simple and complicated as that.
Here's a poem for a few young men.
I've done half. ;) Hahaha
Sebastian
5 monthsLo que entiendo es que hay muchas formas de vivir aventuras y de hacer cosas que los demas vean como inusuales o muy riesgosas, no hace falta escribir poesía, porque está sin dudas es la peor de todas.