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Conversations with Poets

Inspired by Arianna Buchholz
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do you
feel that
more
importantly
do you
hear it
the pain
pooling
in
puddles
until
finally
emerging
as a
crystalizing
chrysalis
of
creativity
ready
to be
sliced
and
diced
for our
pleasure
split up
and
spread out
for the
manic
mesmerized
masses
smiling
in
bitter
sweet
agony
while
the band
plays
on
and
on
and
on...
 
do you
feel that
more
importantly
do you
hear it
when they
wake
up
in the
mourning
cold
curdled
and
craked
from
the troublesome
days before
worn out
and
done in
while slowly
aging
aching
and
anticipating
an end
to the miss
wired
worries
working
through their
troubled
minds
hoping
for some
semblance
of
energy
to fight
as
the alarm
and
the birds chirps
chirping
on
and
on
and
on...
 
do you
feel that
more
importantly
do you
hear it
as they
move
through
their days
sarcastically
smiling
and
searching
for
the meaning
of
it all
feeling
dejected
and
rejected
while
voiceless
passerbys
push
and
pull
them
in
every
direction
but
up
their trials
mounting
with every
second
while
sheep
sanctimoniously
slaughter
their dreams
and
their daze
and
days
drift
on
and
on
and
on...
 
do you
feel that
more
importantly
do you
hear it
as they
return
to their
broken
battered
betraying
homes
sick
and
tired
tired
and
sick
of
denying
trying
and
tying
themselves
to
satisfactionless
slumber
that seems
to last forever
though it’s
never
enough
to
call
come
or
cripple
their backs
for a love
that’s never
there
so they sing
their sad
songs
on
and
on
and
on...
 
do you
feel that
more
importantly
do you
hear it
the pain
pooling
in
puddles
until
finally
emerging
as a
crystalizing
chrysalis
of
creativity
ready
to be
sliced
and
diced
for our
pleasure
split up
and
spread out
the
manic
mesmerized
masses
smiling
in
bitter
sweet
agony
while
the world
goes
on
and
on
and
on...
 
on
and
on
and
on...

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Cory Garcia
over 3 years

Thanks brother!

Vic
over 3 years

Awesome read! Love it

Cory Garcia
about 4 years

Absolutely... On the way :)

Cory Garcia
about 4 years

Thanks!

Joe Marflak
about 4 years

Help me out guys in need of some criticism or anything I want to be a better poet

Joe Marflak
about 4 years

Niiice

Cory Garcia
about 4 years

Thank you brother

Robert L. Martin
about 4 years

Also a story of my life. Well done, Brother

Cory Garcia
almost 5 years

Thank you sister poet :)

Patricia May Neiderer
almost 5 years

on
and
on
as
their loved ones
pass us by....

-wow -love it

Cory Garcia
almost 5 years

Thanks brother and thank you for helping me grow as a writer

james matthew coleman
almost 5 years

Love the bits of wordplay in this piece...... Also the ride, feeling defeated just to come back undefeatable .... and on it goes.... fantastic

Cory Garcia
almost 5 years

Thank you sister poet!
I like your description :)

Debra Romero
almost 5 years

Another meaningful epic flow Cory, like a beautiful
wa
ter
f
a
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Cory Garcia
almost 5 years

Thank you sister poet... I feel the same way about you

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
almost 5 years

This is so awesome. You are an excellent poet. God Bless.

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