We watch captivated
The quiet intensity
Of a stage made larger than life
 
And then
With but a whisper
He screams out her name
And we are all brought to our feet
 
The End
Or a beginning
It is the way the wheel turns
 
To love a life that has an end
To dream and awaken again
To burn so bright and then…
Get swept away
 
To be lost and alone
To anchor and be found
To live this life for the moment when…
In quiet intensity
 
We are brought to our feet…
Again

I was thinking about the plays made of great love stories as I wrote this one...

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Robert L. Martin
más de 3 años

Great. It sounds like how my love has come and gone in my life. Good story

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

Thanks brother!

steven
alrededor de 6 años

cory Good one

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

Amen :)

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

Haha Thanks brother!

james matthew coleman
alrededor de 6 años

Encore!

james matthew coleman
alrededor de 6 años

i have to remember that one! lol!

Richard Walker
alrededor de 6 años

Lets all hope that when we are 'brought to our feet" that we will see the truth of it..!

Melancholy Daydreams
alrededor de 6 años

Yes at times it feels as though a whisper has more intensity

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

Thank you! I love the passion and emotion that can be conveyed sometimes with but a whisper ;)

Melancholy Daydreams
alrededor de 6 años

This is very thoughtful

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

Thanks brother!

Jae Rychlewski
alrededor de 6 años

Definitely suspenseful. Honest and pure :).

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

Thank you... so looking forward to your next one :)

Julia W
alrededor de 6 años

I really like the suspense of this :)

Cory Garcia
alrededor de 6 años

I hear you brother :)

'stiltskin
alrededor de 6 años

That's a beaut Corey - having a lazy poets day today.
BTW when I first got a job it was mon - fri friday was 'Poets' day - Piss Off Early Tommorrow's Saturday.......:)

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