Thank you Gee for the collaboration

In life’s wave of ebb and flow,
there’s mountains high, and valleys low.
Where eagles soar in endless skies,
and natures wonders Grace our eyes.
Flowers bloom on summers day,
thistles and thorns stick and fray;
and mixed therein with roses red,
lie cunning beauty in flower beds

(2013)

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Levi Carter
about 5 years

wow this is amazing great job

Debra Romero
over 5 years

Interesting thank you for bringing this to my attention. :)

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Beds flower in beauty
Cunning lie
Red roses therein mixedFray and Stick
Thorns and Thistles
Day summers onBlooming flowers
Eyes our grace
Wonders natures
and
Skies endlessIn soar eagles
Where Low Valleys
and
High Mountains
Flow and EbbWave Life'sCunning lie indeed :)The last few lines of your poem lend well to reading the poem backwards :)Love your poem sister poet!

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
over 5 years

That's fine. You do what makes you Happy. I like reading your poems. I really do like your style of poetry. That's what makes you, YOU! God Bless, Sandi.

Gee
over 5 years

It is my pleasure to both read and comment on your poems

Debra Romero
over 5 years

Hi, Gee I have no problem at all with suggestions and your version is much more poetic and pleasing. I had wanted to repeat the verse in part for a reason but I guess my reason are not evident enough to keep so I will take up your suggestion and change the stanza and give you part credit...thanks so much for reading and commenting :)

Gee
over 5 years

Hi Debra.
In life's wave of ebb and flow,
there's mountains high,and valleys low.
Where eagles soar in endless skies,
and natures wonders Grace our eyes.Please tell me to f#!k off,but something along those lines would save repeating mountains and valleys low and have a full rhyme throughout.
Please feel free at any time when reading my poems to let me know how anything I post can be,in your eyes,improved as this poetry lark is a constant learning process for me.I hope I have not caused any upset by posting this

Debra Romero
over 5 years

Thank you Sandi, you are so faithful to read. Forgive my absence. I have been doing a lot of bible studies and have not been here lately..

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
over 5 years

Very beautiful my friend. It is how life is.

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