O love within my hearts desire,
you tangled neath brush and briar;
to live below a world of  bitter brine,
while my lips drip with lovers wine
Now in chambers bed I weep,
for I lie amidst dream’s of sweetest fire;
longing for thy love in nestled night,
on sheets of silk and satin white
Where be thy touch O lord,
the smell of thy sweet breath,
or the bristle of thy shadowing awn,
and strength of thy muscular  brawn
The battle of life and death,
from steal and iron claim victory
Thy shouts were heard from the heavens
and death with honor you were given
I die yearning visage of thee
Shall I bleed  chastity with deaths dagger,
or vow to wither as a prim rose,
placed in a book to forever be closed


Writings to a Gallant warrior from his lover (fantasy)

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Debra Romero
over 6 years

What an amazing comment, I am humbled by your words, thank you

Patricia May Neiderer
over 6 years

so sweet and sad and flowing
as the tear drys it leave a trail
for the seer to see
and the reader to read
as you dance from word to word
giving way to waste
while not giving in to haste
sure liked the pace
but it is a sad tale
that can make you feel glowing
sure hope everyone heard

Debra Romero
over 6 years


Debra Romero
over 6 years

Thank you Cory for taking the time to read and to give me some food for thought..:)

Cory Garcia
over 6 years

Love the imagery and the pacing.
You could continue these as a story :)

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
over 6 years

Only because they touch me. Sandi

Debra Romero
over 6 years

Thank you Sandi you have the sweetest comments...:)

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
over 6 years

So beautiful. It flows so well. I really do love this one Debra. Ah, Fantasy is a wonderful way to write. Bravo my friend. God Bless, Sandi.

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