A faint scent of jasmine
Stirred up an emotion
Long, long dormant
 
She wore it often
Her magic potion
Me, to torment
 
© F Aparici
06-15-2013

(2015)

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Nelson D Reyes
21 days

Magnificent!
All in there- the setting, first 3 lines that is familiar; the action, the ambiance and the closure in the next 3.

This is a jewel lyric poem.
Concise, beautiful and longing.

Like and fave. Thanks Brod.

Francis
Francis
20 days

Glad you like it Brod. One of the first poems I wrote. Thank you for faving.

Ingeborg von Finsterwalde/Waltraud I Mack
over 4 years

And that fragrant of Jasmine will bring back the memory every time. Wonderful poem.

Francis
Francis
over 4 years

Thank you Ingeborg. The first poem I posted here. :)

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