A knock at the door...
I courteously opened
I received...
I obliged..
 
Thoughts flowed with mine...
procured creations,
fascinating at times...
 
...it was nice while it lasted...
 
...The drink turned sour...
From a ripe apple...
putrid inside its core,
emanated powerful repulsion.
 
I aired out the room...
The stench remains...
Like a curse...
Impossible to cast out.
 
...No options left...
It is time...
to walk out the door...
away from it all...
far, far away...

(20150527)

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Imrogue
más de 4 años

@jef, thanks for the view and comment! :-)

D. Thurmond   aka  JEF (James Everett Falcon)
casi 5 años

Interesting subject, nicely written. Thanks for the read.

Imrogue
más de 5 años

you're so kind, thank you for your high praise!

lowercasemmmmmm
más de 5 años

your way with words is masterly

Imrogue
más de 5 años

thank you! ... you, the repulsed? no way! :-)

Mr Moonlight
más de 5 años

Eek. I know the feeling form both sides. Sometimes I think I am the knock, sometimes the repulsed. Nicely done.

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