• ABDICATION • *(revised)
 
Overflowing F.EM.A. coffins
Herded masses pressed to purification  camps for new world internment
All will suffer, from the righteously pious to the abhorrently irreverant
 
The raids
The trains
The disease
The planes
Mass graves
 
Interstate highways become
hemorrhaging global veins
Arterial city-scapes pump citizen sheep to viral slaughter
Generals rattle sabers harmonizing with rythmic artillery burst percussion, as plucked wingless  Angels sing threnody choir
 
It was right influence edging
people over the falls
Protocol obeisance by all
until population expectancy is reached
Global tolerance of obedience  
masked in powder blue & white as world peace
 
Arise Ra!
Come Nibiru!
Wormwood Comet descend!
Master of Pacific abyss
climb ashore
disgorging Hell’s fire
on the nation whore
 
This is the world expected to be
Our acceptance of complacency
Taught not to argue with global democracy
Captivated by media policy
You’re my island capital,
birth of my loin
You will all bow to my image, set on ten sided coin
 
Seven Sons of Caesars’ past
escape shafts of nuclear thrones
I will pleasure myself with your wasted offspring, and enslave your youth by fear of surgical strike  drones
Now build my sacred Temple, paved with cloven hooves and Zionist bones
Your denial can not stop
the galloping conflagration
of Death’s four horses
 
 
 
• ABDICATION • †(original)
 
Overflowing F.EM.A. coffins herding masses to camps for new world internment
 
The trains, The disease, The planes, Mass graves
Interstate highway vanes
Arterial city scape pumps sheep to viral slaughter
 
It was right influence, people over the falls
protocol until population expectancy is reached
global tolerance is world peace
Arise RA, Come Nibiru
Master of Pacific Leviathan  climbs ashore bellows fire on the nation whore
You’re my island capital birth of my loin
Son of Carpathia escapes the shaft of nuclear throne
I will pleasure myself with your wasted offspring and enslave your youth
 
This is the world expected to be
Our exceptence of complacency
Taught not to argue with global democracy
captivated by media policy
 
 
 
 
 
 
Written by: J.A. Lütz
© †06/17/2013
*Revised on: 06/30/2013

I could really use some feedbackon your thoughts/opinions on the differences of these two. Please don't be shy, and please don't pull any punches. Thank you.

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Midnight Rose
almost 7 years

No problem I'm always willing to help a fellow poet

Aleksandr Lütz
almost 7 years

Thank you so very much. I am grateful for the feedback. I saw the revised version in a strange (& extremely detailed) vision a few weeks after penning the original.

Midnight Rose
almost 7 years

Verry well written. I like the form o the revised version partially because I see it as harder to read and I like a good challenge. It is well thought out and displays our nation perfectly, the side nobody seems to want to admit is there.

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