Sky Tsunami

Cotton Candy
      Sky Tsunami
 
 
Sky
tsunami
swirls
East
west
cotton
candy
like
Sea
clouds
broke
water
Highways now flowing rivers
Life conveyors welcome sweet
 
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(C)NDR9.1.2017
Photo: NDR Top Sail Beach NC

A tanka to Texas: Linear 5-7-5 haiku plus 7-7.
Life upended. Our prayers to all who suffered.
(My apologies - this poem generated from this catastrophic
life changing event. If there is any silver lining, last line says it all-
responders happy assisting, "respondees" enormously appreciative.)

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Robert L. Martin
oltre 3 anni

Hurricanes sure look beautiful from far up above, alright, just like cotton candy. It sure is quite a bit different when we are caught in the middle of it.

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
oltre 3 anni

Agree. Hurricanes are masters in mimicking cotton candies complete with a straw (eye) in the middle. Fluffy and all but nothing is sweet in them. Thanks Robert.

Vic
oltre 3 anni

Thanks Btod for honoring Houston!

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
oltre 3 anni

Glad to hear you and Sim are OK. And thanks for the like.
Houston and beyond deserves all the love and prayers we can give.

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