[“ goes on...” Millay, Frost]
gale winds
        trees shaken
let loose pollen ambrosia
falling leaves
        ground snow
vernal blooms
        craze  bees
copious pollinators
set life
        to thrive  on
5-7-5 twice
Photo:  ndr

Happy 4th to all ca.C19. Thrive warts and all glorious.

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4 months

5-75 is that a Japanese form as well?

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
4 months

Thanks Brod for liking. Yes you’re right 575 is haiku. I only reformat the tercet haiku into a quintain/limerick but retain the third line a 7 syllable.

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