From conversations with Rumi

Read slowly, savor every word

Softly, as a petal from a dogwood tree
Alights upon calm pond waters,
My fingers land upon your skin
And set alight your soul.
 
Gently, as a midday cooling breeze
caresses calm pond waters,
I press my lips against your skin
And drink the fire that is your soul.
 
Tenderly, as a butterfly’s wings
Reflect in calm pond waters,
My hair will brush against your skin
As my soul reflects your soul.
 
©Olga Gavrilovskiy 2013

Fire, soul, water, lips, kiss

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Olga Gavrilovskiy
over 4 years

Thank you, Lucas. Keep reading, and writing. You have the fire :-)

Lucas Lijewski
over 4 years

All of the sceneries and complexities of and placed behind this poem excites me. I love the way you gently explain everything.

Olga Gavrilovskiy
almost 5 years

Thank you, Manuel :-)

manuel pérez fito
about 5 years

Beautiful reflections in the silence of solitude

Olga Gavrilovskiy
about 5 years

Thank you, Robert, for the high praise :-)

Robert L. Martin
about 5 years

Intimacy is so beautiful. As beautiful as this poem

Olga Gavrilovskiy
over 6 years

Thank you, Cindy :-)

Cindy
over 6 years

This is so soft and gentle. Like a perfect spring day. Wonderful.

Olga Gavrilovskiy
over 6 years

Thank you, Cory. You and I are listening and answering to the same music calling :-)

Cory Garcia
over 6 years

So in love with the written word and it calls to me in this poem... absolutely beautiful :)

Olga Gavrilovskiy
over 6 years

Thank you :-)

crazy enough
over 6 years

Very short but very nostalgic! I like it :)

Olga Gavrilovskiy
over 6 years

Thank you, Patricia. That was the sort of feeling I was going for :-)

Patricia May Neiderer
over 6 years

Very moving!
calming ,
softly!
as the silk brushes against
your thigh in the breeze
of the open window

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