Vic

Vic


 

For miles and miles ahead of me
 
The fog so thick I couldn’t see
 
Onward I go, trusting the Lord
 
For every day, I heed His Word!
 
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05-09-2017
Vic A Evora

Written a few days ago while on my daily 7-mile very early morning walk. It was a tad foggy, so I wrote this little poem while walking - actually texting the poem to myself lest I forget a word or two.

I thought of adding a stanza or two, but I decided the poem is OK as is.

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Delilah
about 2 years

I feel the truth in your words... very captivating

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Vic
about 2 years

Thanks so very much Laila.

Charlotte B. Williams
over 2 years

Beautiful !!! This was a real life experience you had, but as I read it I see that in just a few words you said it all. I love it !!!

Vic
Vic
over 2 years

Thank you Charlotte. I thought that adding another stanza, or even another line will ruin the poem. So I didn't.

Nelson D Reyes
over 2 years

A gem of a poem. Love it. Thank you Brod.
I walk a 15-25 minute mile, depends. Have a happy pace?

Vic
Vic
over 2 years

Thanks for liking Brod. I walk 17-20 minute miles. 17 the first two miles, 20 the last two miles LOL

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