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Catullus is my master and I mix  
a little acid and a bit of honey  
     in his bowl love
 
is my subject & the lack of love  
which lack is what makes evil a  
     poet must strike
 
Catullus could rub words so hard  
together their friction burned a  
     heat that warms
 
us now 2000 years away I roll the  
words around my mouth & count the  
     letters in each
 
line thus eye and ear contend in–
side the poem and draw its move–
     ment tight Milton
 
thought rhyme was vulgar I agree  
yet sometimes if it’s hidden in  
     the line a rhyme
 
will richen tone the thing I most  
despise is quote poetic unquote  
     diction I prefer
 
to build with plain brown bricks
of common talk American talk then  
     set 1 Roman stone
 
among them for a key I know Ca–
tullus knew a poem is like a blow  
     an impact strik–
 
ing where you least expect this I  
believe and yet with me a poem  
     is finally just
     a natural thing.
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