This is more lyrical ... It's one of my songs so it may deviate a bit from my normal poetical format ... That's in my opinion though
One of my more obvious...and a song on guitar ...which I'm not the best at ...but a few of my songs are on here....lyrically driven ....not quite as smooth and poetic in my eyes...but delivers strong message...wether i do that successfully is your call..please help
Note ** all my poems are copyrighted and have codes to prove ownership ... While I doubt anyone here does this ..still have to say Don't steal other people's work wether a poem is good enough or not .... It's personal and directly speaks from the soul of the writer and to take their work and say it's yours ..it's wrong and unnatural ..your stealing a peice of them ...it's nothing to do with money or rights...it's so much more than that...its happened to me .. It can happen to anyone .. It hurts and I always speak out against it even if to most it seems pretentious...