When life gets hard to bear,  just live on.
Know that someone cares,  just live on.
Don’t give up, please don’t give in,
soon the troubled days will end
Please don’t give up my friend, just live on.
They’ll be another day, just live on.
The trials will go away, please just live on
Don’t be afraid to try, even if you have to cry,
There is a God on high, so just live on.
You’ll get your peace of mind, just live on,
Don’t give up before the time, just live on.
The clouds will go away,
They’ll be another day,
If you’ll only say I’ll stay, and just live on.
H.S.I. (c) 2015 - 18.

I don't really know what happens to people who attempt or commit suicide, I think they just lose hope. but I hope someone who may be in that frame of mind, after reading this will say, (I'm gonna live on.)

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Nelson D Reyes
over 2 years

Like. Thank you Charlotte. A gift from God cherished a lifetime, life is.

Charlotte B. Williams
Charlotte B. Williams
over 2 years

Thanks for liking Nelson.

Charlotte B. Williams
almost 5 years

Thank you all for the comments, appreciate it so much.

Robert L. Martin
almost 5 years

Very good advice. I hope someone who is thinking about suicide, will think twice about it after reading your poem.

Leesaan Robertson
almost 5 years

Awesome poem

Ingeborg von Finsterwalde/Waltraud I Mack
almost 5 years

Beautiful, very inspiring.

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