To my lover
I am a french student and I want to try writing poetry. This is my first poem Please let me know If it is good enough and if I could modify something ;)
When I look at his eyes I get a glimpse of his soul Bright, Only a gleam of sun makes them spa… Of a beautiful green,
Incredible is my mother She is kind like no other A pure Angel is nothing compared… Beautiful and fraich as dew, Enchantress
It’s the darkest night I have ever witnessed The Moon reflects on the river In a luminescent wave Here I am
I stare at the mirror All I see is a Monster When have I started to become This horrifying wraith? Like Dorian Gray
Anxiety is dancing in my mind In a loud trance My fears Are rushing into my head How can I ever stop them?
I’m flying Lighter than air Swirling with autumn leaves Golden brown, Yellow,
A witch he thinks I am That a spell I’ve cast on him Through the delicous taste Of what I baked,
Dew is covering my garden, As an invitation to open my eyes Virtuous nature that thinks of me Irresistibly I am drove to you, Devoted and delighted
Words are slipping away From my lips Flooded with emotion I am As the mirage finally came to life
He is of the men you see eveyday A nice fellow working his way But you don’t know him like I do As what defines him is virtue You would’t believe how many times
Light is her name She is precious like gold Luckier than Fortuna, Always outruning fate Flames blaze from her eyes
Today I feel like i am falling of… only to meet the hard, cold floor of my bathroom I cry for help I scream silently
Of a Sunny yellow She wears a legendary name Growing at the place Narcisse had drowned From the own contemplation
The Lily of the Valley Blossoms beautifully Its fragance is light and fresh But poison runs through its veins, A dark side it surely hides
Nothing particular to this shirt, Juste an old piece of fabric One might say But to me it’s a rare and precious item