I count sixteen
How many
I figure
How many
I count
Young forever
You blushing
A kiss loving
Sweet longing
Endearing caring
At all times
Your hands
Your eyes
Your looks
Fresh first rays
Of sun
Dew on
Your cheeks
When you
Your voice
So youthful
Shrieking laughs
Joyful tears
Full of life moments
Of dreams
Of hope
Of tomorrows
Fragrant soft shadows
Of sunlight
In beds of rosemary
And lavender
At twilight you are
Into yet a lullaby of harp
Fluted in moonbeams
Among the sweet deep purple
Vineyards in a cool summer night
Yes you are
Do I count seventeen?
Nay sixteen
I count
Young you are
Now vintaged and sweeter
Evermore unchanged
               . . .

Sixteen she was yes
Sixteen she is indeed yes?
Sixteen always yes

Sweet 16 Valentine's haiku. Like a wine's sweet fragrance young once now vintaged, mellowed yet ever sweeter, love ever blushing.

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Sandi Simms
plus de 4 ans

This is gorgeous! This is how we should all feel. The young at heart stay young.

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
plus de 4 ans

Sandi thank you. And thank you for visiting.

J Ann Crowder
plus de 4 ans

Never stop living young. Good philosophy! It's exactly how I want to feel, everyday. Very well written, and wonderful thoughts.

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
plus de 4 ans

I thought you'd like it. Always good to feel and think young.
Thank you Jenifer for liking.

Robert L. Martin
plus de 4 ans

As long as I can remain thinking young, the longer life I have to live.

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
plus de 4 ans

My two grandsons told me that I was the craziest person they ever met. And they were at the time six and seven years old. Ha! I never felt so young! And crazy!
Thanks again dear friend.

Robert L. Martin
plus de 4 ans

Great story and very well done, Nelson. I love reading your poetry

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
plus de 4 ans

We tend to stay young as we grow old but with an added
outlook, a pleasant one for the most part, a wisdom,
a sweet acceptance of life's challenges we'd been through,
an acceptance in turn that made us unchanged, sixteen again - our love for life, our love for love, hope ever in us.
Thank you for loving my work Robert. It means a lot to me coming from a great poet like you.

plus de 4 ans

Sweet sixteen... Never been kissed... I like!

Nelson D Reyes
Nelson D Reyes
plus de 4 ans

Thank you Brod.

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