I am the dark angel that walks amongst you
Cast down from heaven, I’m faithless
My once white wings, now charred black and hollow
My crimson tears fall, it’s all hopeless
I know who you are, you’re searching for me
Your soul told me, it needs me
I know you cannot set yourself apart from me
Your shadow told me, it wants me.
 
I walk by you to make you shudder, to put fear in your heart when I am near
Light as you know it, will no longer be, darkness is what sets you free
I hiss your sinister secrets, to tempt you oh so wickedly
Don’t you see? I am the opposite of what you strive to be
I visit you in your dreams to hear you plead with me
Your once clear tears drip crimson down your cheeks
I hear you screaming, “God, please forgive me!”
Your halo gone, your feathers charred black and hollow
You tremble as I as I pull you near, a slight whisper in your ear
“Isn’t this darkness amazingly clear?”

(2013)

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NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

I know right that's crazy lol. We probably live a few hours away.

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

OMG, you might be a lot closer to me then you think LOL

NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

I live in northern alabama so I feel ya. :D

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

I live in Tennessee btw lol..southern accent and all, ya'll lol

NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

Exactly!

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

They are like heaven in your mouth!

NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

They are like idk how to describe it like little oval bits of tasty.

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

OMG, Aren't they!!!! I love them, adore them!

NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

Hot tamales are so good I'm sorry lol

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

SCREAMING!!!!! YA...cough cough ... hang on, have to spit out my hot tamale candy first...
SCREAMING!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!

NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

AH! I have a fan! I am fangirling over my fan! Yes. I am a huge fan of you as well. :) You are fabulous.

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

Thank you! I am so happy to connect with fellow poets! I look forward to reading all of your poems in the future :)

NataLee Diane Ricks
plus de 6 ans

You're right. This is it. I love this. Thank you for letting me read this. I also have insomnia and this is what I do at night.

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

Thank you so much Norm, greatly appreciated! Fallen Angel is my daily prayer per se.... Lostsoulshiloh

Norman Goldstein
plus de 6 ans

So good indeed.....what is a poem without a heart?
Norm

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

Thank you my new friend over in England! I love the new poem you posted today!

Lostsoulshiloh
plus de 6 ans

Thank you so much, you're comments are always so deeply appreciated :)

steven
plus de 6 ans

Wow!

Quil
plus de 6 ans

:) not bad at all. Not trying to promote myself, but I think you might like my poem "the maze" based upon these words. 5 stars.

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