How to gather the attention of people.(with poetry)
this is new poetry from a new point of view.. mmmmmm Mine.
Put your best words first.
then follow that with less important nouns and adjectives,..
Remember to not use proper names or places,
leave openings for improvement if possible
do some four stanza work first to bring the audience in
never forget that IN is a complete sentence like ON.
Rewrite the words again but differently
put the best ideas in the title
don’t make it seem like you are going to end
don’t use full sentences unless you have reasonable doubt
remain calm with the verbs, we are not going anywhere
just substitute the real words for the fake words now and then
can you see that this is working?
don’t ever use appropriate punctuation maybe,,
create a sense of new tension that is pervasive like fog on the beach...
Never end the new sentences with the same word you start with Never.
stream of thought no edits at all
in my mind some...
