no seeable pattern will be used in this verse...this is the dark mirror of "Beneath the Tide" the rest of the story if you will...the sacrifice..the ugly truth of getting to the good part..
as said many times above..the dark side of the love poem "beneath the tide" this poem is what it takes to get there...what it was like on the underbelly of the love...thats why its more a run on thought..with ugly cuts and jerks in the verse and a feeling of unsynchronized thoughts... and the tide and ship and wave...and all my usual symbols exist here...
*Note On every poem** all my poems are copyrighted and have codes to prove ownership ... While I doubt anyone here does this ..still have to say Don't steal other people's work wether a poem is good enough or not .... It's personal and directly speaks from the soul of the writer and to take their work and say it's yours ..it's wrong and unnatural ..your stealing a peice of them ...it's nothing to do with money or rights...it's so much more than that...its happened to me .. It can happen to anyone .. It hurts and I always speak out against it even if to most it seems pretentious...
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