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I just want to Dance with You

Inspired by DJSisterPain
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Part way into some deep meaningful conversation – in a half serious tone I say

“Philosophy is the hope of the resolved, the settled, and the fixed... It teaches us that Life wants to kill each and every one of us... and then tries to convince us that IT will do the job... ”

[Interjecting]
“Now I know your name” you say
Holding my gaze as if embracing silence itself

You’re enjoying my discomfort
watching with internal laughter an eternity spanning seconds
held captive by possibilities to profound to understand and wondering

My comical attempts at escaping togetherness
an out of place grin wrapped in dull worries
complimented by bright eyes to sincere to dismiss out of hand and sundering

“We are all made of stardust” you say
A crack in the sky in your hand
breaking me with your eyes
you reach out
piercing my flesh with your sweat sweet touch
hypnotized and memorized
I just want to dance with you

Sing me a song to free my mind
a dance to soothe my soul
I just want to dance with you

the blues to dream the reds to feel
our every breath and thought drawn adrift like a dream journeying
stretching from desire
the greens to grow the golds to fly
till everything is gone except you and I
evoking life invoking death
I just want to dance with you

You speak my name in hearing ears
oblivion
as the church of the moment presses infinite
through the valley forming streams
the promise
whispering and questioning
was it 4 large jars or 6
Sighing dreadful yawns as we label the dawn
I just want to dance with you

Telling tales of suicides
Smashing to bits in sweaty fits
a spectacle seen only in touch
Sing me a song to free my mind
a dance to soothe my soul
One take wonder two takes hope three takes taking the long way home
I just want to dance with you

draw from me melodic movements poetic refrain
your candy apple colored lips
biting me to the core
I just want to dance with you

“We are all made of stardust” you say
A crack in the sky in your hand
breaking me with your eyes
you reach out
piercing my flesh with your sweat sweet touch
hypnotized and memorized
I just want to dance with you

Sing me a song to free my mind
a dance to soothe my soul
I just want to dance with you

The blues to dream the reds to feel
our every breath and thought drawn adrift like a dream journeying   stretching from desire
the greens to grow the golds to fly till everything is gone except you and I evoking life invoking death
I just want to dance with you

Caught up in this moment – my senses fueled by song and dance – In all seriousness I tell you

“Passion is the spectacle of oblivion bringing the message that everything will be alright... tonight we are stones swimming on waves of your creation... letting them wash over our sweat drenched bodies... letting them sink ALL our worries and fears... yes tonight I believe... with all the music flowing between us... that WE can do the job”

“We are all made of stardust” you say
A crack in the sky in your hand
breaking me with your eyes
you reach out
piercing my flesh with your sweat sweet touch
hypnotized and memorized
I just want to dance with you

Sing me a song to free my mind
a dance to soothe my soul
I just want to dance with you

The blues to dream the reds to feel our every breath and thought drawn adrift like a dream journeying
stretching from desire
the greens to grow the golds to fly till everything is gone except you and I
evoking life invoking death
I just want to dance with you

Long drawn out notes in regards to this piece...

This one is full of references for parallelism and depth - in this case Biblical and drug related

A reference to Eden/Paradise Eve and the biting of the fruit of Knowledge
"...candy apple colored lips
biting me to the core..."

Jesus on the Cross pierced in the side and water pouring out... or ... The ARK during the flood with the same measurements with its entry being the same [destruction, salvation, or both]
"...piercing my flesh with your sweat sweet
touch..."

Old testament 4 jars poured out 3x leading to destruction of the priests of Baal
Or 6 jars of water in the New Testament that Jesus turned to Wine [again destruction, salvation, or both]
"...through the valley forming streams
the promise
whispering and questioning
was it 4 large jars or 6..."

Referencing the 4 jars of the old testament as well as the three times Peter denied Jesus [again destruction, salvation, or both]
"...One take wonder two takes hope three
takes taking the long way home..."

The colors from club lighting as well as drug colors and their effects
"...the blues to dream the reds to feel
the greens to grow the golds to fly till..."

Philosophy vs Passion or Law vs Intent
"...Philosophy is the hope of the resolved,
the settled, and the fixed..."

"...Passion is the spectacle of oblivion
bringing the message that everything will be
alright..."

Taken from an earlier piece
"...she laughs when I tell her half joking
that philosophy is a whore selling its wares
to anyone willing to pay its price
always ready to abandon
when we can no longer afford it..."

"...she looks at me mischievously when i tell
her
that passion is a saint offering itself freely
never abandoning
and always willing and wanting
to charge into any situation for the chance
to sing..."

Ideas introduced
An Invitation to Dance

Piaciuto o affrontato da...
Altre opere di Cory Garcia...



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