the fantasy
begins…
 
we close our eyes
and
smile
at the beauty we see
walking
the innermost path
the secret trail
that only we know
hand in hand
we find ourselves
unaccompanied
walking barefoot
unwrapped
unadorned
in our garden
the scent of rain
of honeysuckle
filling the air
we begin to dance
provocative
in proximity
satisfyingly slow
listening
to the winds
enchanting
melodious
hymn
soft grass
prophetically
encouragingly
damp
underfoot
the coolness of it
contrasting
with our budding desires
bright
voyeuristic
stars
gathering
shiningly
above
tonight
we find ourselves
much closer
than we ever thought
we could be
our innocence
giving way
to desires
poorly
concealed
our flesh
aching
for more than
a brief
caress
our lips
moist
expectantly
parted
desiring
to speak
with the gifting
of our tongues
sweet
divine
undeniable
closeness
igniting
the moment
two hearts
set afire
with love
eyes
exploring
the depths
of souls
aching
to mingle
lips
meet
there is no going back
nor do we want to
as we are taken
higher
than we ever
thought possible
two
becoming one
our colors
bleeding
in concert
in an immortal
embrace
our minds
drenched
with desire
all
is feeling
and
feeling
is all
giving ourselves
completely
to passion
drifting
with each breath
exploring
wholly
the landscape
of heaven
safe harbor
found
in each caress
till at last
we anchor
upon eden’s
shore
this sacred place
carefully
prepared
just for us
this secret
garden
paradise
where we
are the fruits
of eternal life
and
knowledge
where we
are the love
that in the silence
is acknowledged
for we
are two hearts
brought together
to live
one life
 
the fantasy
begins…

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Cory Garcia
over 5 years

I had you at the mentioning of stars ;)Ink stains on your fingertips
and stardust flowing through your veins the heavenly concert within shines throughout your work sister poet :)

Julia W
over 5 years

Love it!

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thank you MD :)Eden/Paradise/Heaven
It begins and ends with trust/faith... and its lifeblood flows with TLC...GLYASDI-c

Melancholy Daydreams
over 5 years

Your words inspire me to find this eden. Excellent writing and vivid imagery

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thanks brother :)

Danny MF'n Stone
over 5 years

Very descriptive, well done.

Velle-del
over 5 years

I love it !

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Changed it a bit... wanted to make it more personal and to try and get it to flow better

Velle-del
over 5 years

That's... so awesome. I'm glad the beginning of love inspired a great writer like you, since most of the adult writer i've known dislike the thought of putting young love and such into their piece or to read about it, since its considered as "childish". :) But all in all, this piece is so great, and totally relatable... the fantasizing :)

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thanks! I was imagining young love and a couple beginning their journey together

Velle-del
over 5 years

Romantic, and great imageries !! Love it !

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