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i just want to find my Eve and watch this world burn... my feelings... her feelings... our doubts... insecurities... misconceptions... truths... and responsibilities... every part of us... i want to tear them from each others flesh... with hard kisses... gentle bites... deep strokes... and short carresses... i want... i need... to watch the world burn in her eyes... to feel the hot flames of our passion... as we devour this world... and each other... as we set fire to everything we survey... leaving us sobbing and sweating... scorched by the flames of pure bliss... our wet hot and broken bodies... completely spent... laying there...  wordlessly... in each others arms...


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Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thank you sister poet :)

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
over 5 years

My goodness all that passion. Sounds so beautiful and sooo hot! I think your a very passionate writer. I'm surprised you haven't found your Eve. Her loss. Lol.sandi

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Oh yeah!

Debra Romero
over 5 years

Passion at it's best!

Danny MF'n Stone
almost 6 years

Haha oh shit! Don't think I wanna go with that thought process again James! Lol

james matthew coleman
almost 6 years

or is it ..... How many Jill's do you have to go through before you realize you already had your Eve??...lol

james matthew coleman
about 6 years

Many thanks Cory :)
How does it go?.... oh yeah,, You sir, are a gentleman, and a poet!

Cory Garcia
about 6 years

thanks brother... your work is an inspiration and you are an amazing poet!

Cory Garcia
about 6 years

lol... you would ask that!!!thanks brother :)

Danny MF'n Stone
about 6 years

How many Jill's do ya have to go through to find this "Eve" ha. Great write!

james matthew coleman
about 6 years

So much drive and yearning... Sing it brother, sing it! ... Awesome.

Cory Garcia
about 6 years

my goodness you do inspire!

Patricia May Neiderer
about 6 years

the skin of the fruit
peels the silver wrapper
off of the kiss, as i place
in your mouth
- the melting seeds
dripping out of the fruit
as it pulls it's skin back on
lemon on sugar
would like it that way
to be sweet
through and thru
the mark where the seeds
fell to the ground
watered by you
brings much life

Cory Garcia
about 6 years

thanks brother! i really enjoy being surrounded by all you amazing poets... there is a wealth of creative springs here.

Norman Goldstein
about 6 years

I really so enjoyed the momentum and flow.great

Cory Garcia
about 6 years

Thank you :)

Velle-del
about 6 years

Sweetly passionate!

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