Cory Garcia

Cory Garcia

 
The Flowers She Gave Him

a bit of word art

**must view from PC

 
 
        ^^^^^      ^^^^^         ^^^^^
        Broken        Mad              Painful
         Words   Obscenities  Consequences
            +++        +++++          +++++
               S                 S                    S
                     c            h              w
                        r         o          e
                           e      u       a
                             a    t     r
                              m
                                   i
                                   n
                                   g
 
 
 
 
 
 
Meanwhile the wild flowers he brought her
                    sit drying in the corner ;)

** Just playing around with shapes

  • 1
  • 3
  •  
  •  
Login to comment...
Robert L. Martin
about 5 years

Hi Cory. Very Creative. It took a little while to find out how read it, but it was worth the time. I tried to do that with one of my poems, but couldn't figure out how to format it on the computer. You have a great imagination.

Cory Garcia
over 6 years

Thank you sister poet

Happy Girl
over 6 years

this is fantastic!

Cory Garcia
almost 7 years

Thanks!

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
almost 7 years

Wonderfully playful yet sad. Loved it as usual you always leave us wanting more. Sandi.

Cory Garcia
almost 7 years

Thank you :)

Debra Romero
about 7 years

This is really cool and creative.

Cory Garcia
about 7 years

thank you :)

AAA
about 7 years

And they all die.
Hahaha sorry, couldn't resist throwing that in, I don't think that. Great job though Cory! I enjoy the creativeness of it all, and I agree with Richard on the dying flowers. It's a sad sentiment but beautifully expressed.

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

Thank you dear one :)

Julia W
over 7 years

Cory, this is pure perfection :)

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

As are you dear one :)

Velle-del
over 7 years

Es usted muy amable! :)

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

;) a ti todo el tiempo

Velle-del
over 7 years

Inteligente, señor!

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

Ha thanks! It was a fun day lol :)

ZigZag
over 7 years

I love it!!!

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

Relationships like flowers come in all shapes and sizes ;)

Richard Walker
over 7 years

Clever, I would not have your patience, the point about this verse is the gift of flowers, seemingly ignored to be left withering, perhaps like the dying of their relationship.....

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

Thanks!

Amber M. Royse
over 7 years

Very cool!

Cory Garcia
over 7 years

Read from the stem up? Its a stretch but I was way bored and thought working it into a shape would keep me busy

'stiltskin
over 7 years

Ok I get it now...excellent!Very clever Cory - took me a while:)

Liked or faved by...

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti) Happy Girl Scarlet Lips
Email

Other works by Cory Garcia...

Some poets followed by Cory Garcia...

Deana Kat Martinez Melancholy Daydreams The Refined Poet Velvet55 Alex Deloney Rayon mclaren