The importance of a sentence is usually told in the sentence itself, whereas "extra" details are withheld in brackets, this poem is the exact opposite. The sentences are beautiful lies. The brackets are harsh truths and inherently of more import.
Written at 3:04 am on 05/12/2015.
© L.J. Slaferek
When you’re too tired to feel Too numb to care When there’s no one there To hold you close The Darkness obliges
He is lost Alone Is he dead? Is he alive? Trembling hands
Doomed to wander endlessly 'I cannot hear a sound’' Then suddenly, a sound that is not… 'I cannot smell anything’' Then immediately, a scent unlike a…
So cold, Why is it so cold? The air as I suck it in In gasping breaths After I have punched my knuckles…
The words on the pages blur Fading away in a mist A mist of tears, floods In a waterfall, Like so many drops of blood
Raging rivers of hurt Ending in Cascading waterfalls of sorrow That crash into A deep, dark lake of responsibilit…
center WILL HE JUMP? HE STANDS THERE WAITING
Why me? What am I? Where do I belong? When did it get this bad? Questions that I cannot answer
Shadows all around Smothering the ground Scraping along the walls Of my mind A thing of darkness
Is it dark? Or am I blind? The spirals of encroaching night Betray the trust of the light. Shadows wail beyond the mist
The Sound of Nothing What sound does Nothing make? The sound of quiet A soothing sound Or a lonely one?
'Tic Toc’' The clock struck one There is a young man Who did not feel so young Who envied a clock the time it had
Fade away We all fade away We suffer In silence And the world likes it that way
I hate smiling, Because it’s always fake. I hate laughing, Because it’s always empty. I hate this heart,
I can’t keep up this race, So bone-chillingly lonely, Still lingering in this cold place… I’ve had this dream before... Pain, agonizing pain strikes again…