subconscious affirmations through seductive poetry

*be sure to extend the pauses with the ellipsis... dont focus too hard on the words... instead let your mind wander to the images it chooses... and find a comfortable pace...

i see you...
sitting there...
ice water tears...
filling...
your eyes...
staring...
intently...
tracing...
my outline...
with such wanting...
dreaming...
of the sound...
of my sighs...
filling...
the high air...
of your...
truest...
fantasy...
you have known...
for some time now...
instinctively...
that i...
am the drug...
you...
have been searching for...
day...
after day...
peeking...
when you think...
no one...
is looking...
yearning...
for the impartation...
of my meaning...
because you know...
deep...
inside...
that i...
am the cure...
for your...
disease...
your deepening...
depression...
come...
closer...
dear one...
let me satisfy...
your...
curiosity...
your...
desire...
to be risky...
let us...
meditate...
on your...
escape...
from the mundane...
existence...
of your...
humdrum life...
i am always...
here...
for you...
to help...
you cope...
with the sorrow...
to relax...
and relieve...
your boredom...
to put...
an end...
to your...
low...
self-esteem...
so come...
closer...
touch me...
you know you want to...
its ok...
they can’t see...
trace your fingers...
across me...
feel...
your energy...
increase...
your sluggish...
lifeless...
shackles...
removed...
like clothes...
falling...
to the floor...
of your inhibitions...
let go...
of your...
self-consciousness...
your...
traumatized...
socially...
anxious...
schizophrenic...
brain...
focus...
on me...
the true meaning...
of your existence...
that’s right...
you understand now...
so many ways...
to taste...
what you’ve...
been looking for...
but...
let me...
tell you...
dear one...
the best way...
open...
your mouth...
for me...
a little wider...
now...
take a bite...
just one...
with your...
hot lips...
feel...
the effects...
of our...
desire...
spreading...
as it...
sets...
you...
free...
from the broken...
chains...
that have...
held you...
for so long...
seal...
your kiss...
around me...
tap into...
my veins...
and drink...
a lifeblood...
better...
than any drug...
taste...
my flesh...
this...
wholly...
sacrament...
let us have...
our own...
private...
ritual...
as you plant...
yourself...
upon me...
gripping...
my substance...
psychedelic...
are the drugs...
contained...
within...
use me...
in your...
healing...
ritual...
let yourself...
grow wild...
on my...
substance...
your...
religious...
rite...
infusing...
my roots...
with...
your...
nectar...
the affects...
of my...
psilocybin...
abusing...
your alter...
as you...
become aware...
emerging...
from the...
consequences...
the cutting...
of your purity...
wildly...
overdosing...
on my...
ecstasy...
creating...
within...
an experience...
capable...
of freeing you...
there is no other...
that could ever...
satisfy...
the way...
i do...
and when...
i...
am done...
with you...
i...
will drive...
you...
slowly...
home...
to the now...
where the world...
is waiting...
for you...
upon the green grass...
of...
your...
tomorrow...

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Cory Garcia
over 5 years

:)
keep on singing... we love your songs

Gee
over 5 years

Jeepers Cory you lost me before I'd even started.You're posting works like this whilst I'm reinventing nursery rhymes and the like,and to be fair I didn't understand 90% of the reviews.I need a serious dose of education .

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

yeah, if the thoughts stand guard
and having a remembrance wall
it takes many bricks to build a house, and the bricks cured
to prevent intrusion, same as the mind needing an inspector
are the fingers playing the same notes that the ears are hearing
the mind polished and protected
what a beautiful building block
or watering pot- ready for action!

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

\(~o~)/

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

yeah, i like that idea,
kinda like that self destruct button
only in reverse,
Tazz out of control for sure
till you lay your finger on his head
letting all the marbles
roll in to the right holes
the ending sure would feel good

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

the spirit free
while the soul yields
much more
than can be imagined :)

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

taking my second dose
so not to waste any
braking free- would be fun
a couple more dips
before done

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

i wonder what the
label would read,,,,wrote out to me
for sure
or insanitythe freeing of ones mind

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

! raising of eyebrows lol

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

i am the rib of somebody
the longing to be placed back
inside of my Adam
someday he will find me
laying on the ground
still wet from the dew
breathe the breath of life
into energy that we can share
one spark two sparks
three sparks --more!-raising of eyebrows

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thank you! I read so many amazing works on this site that my voice takes on some of their traits sometimes :)
i love your songs as well sister poet :)

Velle-del
over 5 years

I've never really expected you to be fond of this particular style as an amazingly creative poet you already are, and since i am also a big fan of passionately sweet affections pieces of writing... sir... I bow to thee twice than I've already have. :)

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

the passion
comes from within
it does not rely
on external influence
yet relishes the opportunity
to share lifes wonders
with a kindred soul
and longs to trancend
someday
in the spirit of love
with my Eve
wherever she may be...* glitter falling from my eyes
landing on your wet hand*
Nice!

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

you make it sound so easy
like the toss of the arm
to stop the taxi
hop in
and there i am
with out hope deferred
glitter falling from my eyes
landing on your wet hand*first time around-
i'll read again and again
enjoyed it......much!

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thanks brother!Mantras are cool...The thought of a mantra reminds me of a movie I was watching that was going for a similar affect... it makes you wonder... what if a clean thought could enter a dirty mind... a mind tormented from time to time by self destructive thoughts... what if it could kill all of the unhealthy thoughts... coax them to their end willingly... burn them up with their own desires... and then the clean thoughts just kind of move in and take over... now wouldnt that be cool...maybe its impossible... improbable... or just plain wrong... oh well... so be it...I love to talk hard anyway :)

Norman Goldstein
over 5 years

Far better a way to open and free and heal the mind so ever caught in life's dim reality than any medication.....mantra like in affect and yet it stirs while it calms...genius.....

james matthew coleman
over 5 years

It's perfect my friend, a piece to be proud of.

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

thank you brother! it started out as a way to convey a person having the ability to be a drug for another...while I was trying to think of a way to do this the thought occured to me that in order to convey it properly there should be a similar affect for the reader... the rough cut sought to free the reader of the feelings that they were not good enough while at the same time remove the pressure to be perfect and replace it with a desire to be themselves...a death to the ideal... thus removing the pressure of being perfect...it came across as harsh though so instead it now conveys a sense of acceptance at the end... not as powerful but less of a shock for sure...

james matthew coleman
over 5 years

This reads like a ribbon...
Whipping words in every direction...
It's curls caving in...
Collapsing every thought before it.

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