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When asked if I could make Laundry sound Passionate

inspired by ""
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a poem
about laundry?
sure
...
I could pull it off
 
your delicates
not so
delicate
your cycle
set to
hot
cause I like
to
watch
your colors
bleed
 
spinning you
around
my
movements
causing you
to
shake
as you
rub
against
my
sides
 
I might
be
similar
to the one
on the corner
cept
I don’t run
on quarters
and
I won’t let you
stay sorted
HE
doesnt have
anything
on me
 
cause once
I make you
wet
you’ll need more
than a
dryer
to recover
from
this
lover
 
no
board
no
iron
can keep you
away
from me
cause you know
when you feel
dirty
when you are all
alone
and
you have nothing
else
to do
you’ll come
rushing
back
placing yourself
in my care
 
shutting
the
door
twisting
the
knob
and
pressing
the
button
once
again
on
your very own
washing
machine
...

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Cory Garcia
about 5 years

Thank you sister poet :)

Angel Lady (Sandi Guidotti)
about 5 years

I don't think I'll ever look at laundry (especially Dirty Laundry) in the same way as I use too. I guess you can make anything sound passionate. Great writing. Sandi. :)

Cory Garcia
about 5 years

Thank you sister poet... We were having a talk I think it was about my poem "My Secret Obsession" and they thought I might be able to make anything sound passionate... well anything but laundry that is ;)

laulau
about 5 years

This is great! Innocently passionate.

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

"!"

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

it all depends...
on who...
you...
are thinking about...
the bible...
is full...
of passion...
;)

Patricia May Neiderer
over 5 years

using the side of my foot to push the dirty pile of laundry aside, take me to the place where you slid the quarters in, waiting for the click, to know that no one is looking, gushing water can be fun
in the tub with a little scrub, gently not to wear to thin, as they try peeping in....wrong store,,two doors down.....they are selling dish soap...
gotta love the bubbles......

Karen Newkirk
over 5 years

As a good church girl my fellow pew mates would be a little disturbed by the fact that I love the puns, innuendo and double entendre of that hot n bothered verses. Gotta go pray for forgiveness now...lol...

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

here is to gettin dirty more often :D

Gee
over 5 years

Nice Cory .Laundry and sex are the same in so far as both should be done once a week and properly,even if not needed!

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

thanks for the support dear one :)

Olga Gavrilovskiy
over 5 years

Cory, you keep surprising me with your verse, it is so multifaceted and diverse...You go so easily from soulful pieces like Smiling Child to grafic in their intensity like Washing Machine to deeply erotic like The Hunt. Your nimble mind and rich imagination amaze me, in a very good way :-)

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

Thanks brother!

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

:)

james matthew coleman
over 5 years

especially laundry!

james matthew coleman
over 5 years

Haha! No "failed narcissist" found here bro!.. I like it, very cool.

Cory Garcia
over 5 years

just goes to show you that everything can be fun if done right :)

Amber M. Royse
over 5 years

HEHE I LOVE IT!!! So much passion put into doing laundry! I'm going to share it!!!!

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