Great. Great poem. Great pep talk. Poetry is much more than just writing words. It's more like throwing yourself into it. You said it so passionately. Beautiful!

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Thank you sister poet... a life lived in passion is a life truly lived :)

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This is beautiful. I think every child should be told this. Very uplifting indeed. Never hold yourself back as we all have that passion in us. But you put it so beautiful it makes it all the more meaningful. Love your words brother poet.

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Love your spirit brother! Thanks!

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a wonderful call for freeing the beaten spirit gifted so freely by our false teachers....rules followed are followed by fools.....awake and be is what you say to me............

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You know your good brother...your just not fully realizing it all the time... give yourself permission to be great... despite the haters... the nay sayer amplifiers... and the youll never be good enough repeaters...Don't be bound by broken chains...the first time you opened your mouth and spoke those words you were free from the chain of the skyway...Bedides... take a look at "Spinning Verse" I sent em your way... now let them see how Mr Mays displays plays and lays those words... those verses without curses that other players just cant fathom...nuff said

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Damn, If only I can get that deep. It takes lots of wisdom and expirience.

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