Vic

Vic


 

Tantric melody;
Candied lullaby in his head
Sweet emotions overwhelm;
Soporific and hypnotizing!
Melancholy bids farewell
Gloom vanishes to thin air
As passionate dreams beckon,
He hears angels sing!
 
Visceral sensations;
Visual, aural and tactile
Overrun pleasure centers
Of his mind’s eye!
Silky soothing atmosphere
Emits ambrosial fragrance
And with unsuppressed joy,
His spirit soars in the sky!
 
Heavenly feelings
Soon as their eyes locked
The first time
That spectacular twilight.
In the fairgrounds,
He’s by the fountain
By the cotton candy stand
She’s a sweet sight!
 
Smitten, moonstruck, besotted?
Quite an understatement
Swept off his feet!
Head over heels! More likely
Captivated, a hostage,
But happy to be
Future forever altered,
Yet he smiles so brightly!
 
12-01-2016
© Vic A Evora

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D. Thurmond   aka  JEF (James Everett Falcon)
almost 3 years

Nice!

Vic
Vic
almost 3 years

Thank you

J Ann Crowder
almost 3 years

Beautiful! Sort of childlike and still very romantic. Love, fairgrounds, cotten candy. I pictured a sunset too. Nicely written. I like your descriptive words.

Vic
Vic
almost 3 years

Thanks Jenifer. I needed mellifluous, sugary words to describe how beautiful young love is. LOL

Ingeborg von Finsterwalde/Waltraud I Mack
almost 3 years

Just beautiful!

Vic
Vic
almost 3 years

Many thanks Ingeborg! :)

Benjamin G. Sangalang
almost 3 years

Couldn't help but re-read again and again this beautiful poem.

Vic
Vic
almost 3 years

Thanks amigo. Few things are as beautiful as young love...

Delilah
almost 3 years

Waaw! What a sweet atmosphere! Beautiful cadence in the way of your sweet words! Delightful.. a summer dream..

Vic
Vic
almost 3 years

Thank you Laila. I saw your recent work at instagram. They are beautiful. I really admire your work!

Nelson D Reyes
almost 3 years

Nice. A prelude to love month, St. Valentine's?
Thanks Brod. Brings back memories of summer
outdoor concerts cotton candy days. Love to eye flirt!
Like.

Vic
Vic
almost 3 years

Thanks Brod. The story's based on those UP days from so long ago. :)

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